Subterfuge; Post revision cards

Discussion in 'Home Made Cards' started by FoundationOfRancor, Jun 12, 2001.

  1. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Oh, ok then.

    Push Forward
    1U
    Instant
    Target oppenent shuffles two target permanents into their controllers library.
    Draw 4 cards.
  2. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Firestarter
    R
    Creature - Mercenary
    Sacrifice a green permanent or a forest: Firestarter deals 1 damage to target creature or player.
    1/1

    Phoenix's Cascade
    4R
    Instant
    Phoenix's Cascade deals 2 damage to target creature or player.
    At the end of your turn, if Phoenix's Cascade is in your graveyard, return it to your hand.

    Caster's Telekinesis
    1U
    Enchant Creature
    U: Target creature gains flying
    1W: Target creature cannot attack this turn.
    1B: Target creature must attack this turn if able.

    Urgent Teleportation
    1U
    Instant
    Remove a non-land permanent that you control from the game.
    1, Remove Urgent Teleportation from the game: Return the removed card back into play. You may play this ability only if Urgent Teleportation is in your graveyard.

    Puppet Masquerade
    1U
    Enchant Creature
    When enchanted creature is put into the graveyard from play, return it to play under you control.

    Gust Elemental
    1U
    Creature - Elemental
    Flying
    If Gust Elemental is enchanted, then it gets +3/+3
    1/1

    Picket Sniper
    1BB
    Creature - Sniper
    T: Each player discards a card at random.
    1/1

    Battle Guilt
    1W
    Instant
    You may only play Battle Guilt after the attack step of a turn.
    Destroy target creature that did not attack or block this turn.

    Wolf Assasins
    3G
    Creature -.....Wolf Assasins
    If an oppenent controls a legend, Wolf Assasins is unblockable.
    3/4
  3. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    I am at the beginning of a 6-1/2 day weekend. If I don't get any card revisions posted by next Thursday, either assume I am dead, or, if I show my face, kill me. :rolleyes:

    Spidey had the right idea about Marrow Shambler.
  4. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Spell Distortion
    2U
    Instant
    The next Sorcery or Instant you play this turn loses all abilties and now reads "Search through your library and choose a permanent. You may play that permanent without paying it's mana cost. Shuffle your library afterwards."

    Wood Warrior
    G
    Creature - Wood Warrior
    Sacrifice Wood Warrior: Add RR to your mana pool.
    1/2
  5. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Fall from Grace
    1BB
    Sorcery
    Gain control of target white creature permanently. It is now black.

    Tribond
    1G
    Instant
    You must pay G for each forest you control in addition to the casting cost of this spell.
    Three target creatures get +3/+3 until end of turn.

    Temporary Theft (?)
    4U
    Instant
    Gain control of target permanent until end of turn.

    Mythical Wood
    G
    Enchant Land
    Green spells cost G less to play.
    Whenever enchanted land is tapped for mana, sacrifice it.

    Desert Golem
    2
    Artifact creature - Golem
    Haste
    1: Desert Golem gets +1+1 until end of turn.
    At the end of turn, sacrifice all lands you control.
    1/1

    Lightning Wall
    3R
    Creature - Wall
    Lightning Wall may block creatures with flying and landwalk as if they didnt have that ability.
    0/6

    Shadow Scorpions (name?)
    Creature - Shadow
    1B
    Shadow Scorpions cannot be blocked except by black creatures or artifact creatures.
    Whenver Shadow Scorpions deals damage to a player, that player must sacrifice a creature.
    0/1
  6. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    Gigatherium
    4GGG
    Creature - Gargantua
    */*
    Gigatherium has power equal to the number of creatures in play with 1 toughness.
    Gigatherium has toughness equal to the number of creatures in play with 1 power.

    Detritus Sifter
    2R
    Creature - Beast
    1/1
    When an artifact is put into a grayevard, put it on Detritus Sifter instead.
    Detritus Sifter gets +1/+0 for each artifact on it.
  7. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Hey Thallid, it's great to hear from you!

    Gigatherium
    This card could cost G. Maybe I'm reading it wrong, why is it so expensive?

    Detritus Sifter
    What does the name mean? it's interesting...
    I think it could be worded better by saying "Whenever an artifact is put into the graveyard, put a +1/+0 counter on this."
  8. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    Gigatherium is expensive so that those weird Saproling decks don't attack for infinity until the turn after they go off and cast Verdeloth with kicker. But you're probably right that it could cost less; at the very least, it shouldn't cost too much more than Keldon Warlord. How about 1GGG?

    Come to think of it, I wasn't too sure of what detritus really meant myself, so here's what Webster's has to say:

    de tri tus, n. 1. rock in small particles or other material worn or broken away from a mass, as by the action of water or glacial ice. 2. any disintegrated material; debris.

    Basically, it's a polysyllabic word for crud. Crud Sifter didn't seem to make a good name though. :p

    And as far as its ability goes, I specifically made it that way so that the artifacts wouldn't be usable for the rest of the game. However, the ability is a little far reaching, so I'll change it to "Whenever an artifact is put into a graveyard,..."


    Go read my list of white cards (if you haven't done so already).
  9. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    Combat Boots
    WW
    Enchant Creature
    Enchanted creature gets +0/+2 and has plainswalk.
    If enchanted creature blocks or is blocked by a creature with less toughness than enchanted creature, enchanted creature gets first strike until end of turn.

    Goblin Cookie
    1R
    Creature - Goblin
    0/1
    Tap, Sacrifice Goblin Cookie: Goblin Cookie deals 1 damage to target Goblin you control and 1 damage to another target creature.

    Demonflight
    1BB
    Enchant Creature
    Enchanted creature gets +1/+0 and can only be blocked by black and/or artifact creatures.
    When enchanted creature deals damage to a player, that player loses that much life instead.
    During your upkeep, enchanted creature deals 1 damage to you.
  10. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    They look fine to me, except Goblin Cookie seems horribly underpowered.


    Strength Sponge (Name?)
    2
    Artifact
    T: Target creature loses either flying, first strike, trample, or protection from the color of your choice until end of turn.

    [Oh, I think the Warlord guy should cost 3G or 1GG....still calculating the saprolings/squirrels, this card is obviously infior to Keldon Warlord. -FoR]
  11. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    How about this instead:

    Goblin Cookie
    1R
    Creature - Goblin
    1/2
    Tap, Sacrifice Goblin Cookie: Goblin Cookie deals 1 damage to a Goblin you control and 2 damage to target creature.
  12. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Thats a much better revision!

    Do you still think that the */* guy should be 1GGG? I really have to disagree with you on this.
  13. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

  14. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    ....Ok.

    Corrupt Administration
    2BB
    Creature - Burecrats
    T; Put a -1/-1 counter on ~this~: Put a -1/-1 counter on target creature. Remove that counter at the end of turn.
    2/2

    Baneling
    1B
    Creature -
    Whenever an oppenent plays an artifact or enchantment spell, sacrifice ~this~.
    3/3

    Karma Blacklash
    BB
    Instant
    Each opponent sacrifices a creature for each creature you control that was sent to your graveyard this turn.

    Drake
    4U
    Creature - Drake
    Flying
    U: Draw a card. Use this ability only if ~this~ ceam into play this turn.
    2/2

    Counter Counterspell
    UU
    Instant
    Counter all other instants on the stack.

    Storm Refugees
    2R
    Creature - Nomad
    Haste
    When this comes into play, tap all other creatures.
    2/2

    Blah
    1U
    Enchantment
    2UU, Skip your next attack step: Creatures you control gain flying an +2/+2 until end of turn.

    Goblin Blah
    R
    Creature - Goblin
    Haste
    Whenver a creature comes into play, you are dealt 2 damage.
    2/2
  15. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    Gossamer Cauldron
    4
    Artifact
    X, Tap, Sacrifice a creature: Put an X/X blue creature token with flying into play, then put a wing counter on Gossamer Cauldron. X is the number of wing counters on Gossamer Cauldron.

    Wire Cage
    2
    Artifact
    You may choose not to untap Wire Cage during your untap step.
    2, Tap: Put target creature on Wire Cage. Treat it as being in play, but it can't attack or block. If Wire Cage leaves play or becomes untapped, remove the creature from Wire Cage.
    If an instant targeting a creature resolves and Wire Cage is tapped, destroy Wire Cage.
    3: Untap Wire Cage.
  16. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Gossamer Cauldron
    It's hard to tell without testing, but this card seems pretty balanced. Am I right in thinking the earler tokens grow as more wing counters are placed on? (The first 1/1 token I create will become a 2/2 when I make another one?)

    Wire Cage
    Looks good.
  17. Thallid Ice Cream Man 21sT CeNTuRy sChIZoId MaN

    I hadn't thought of it that way, but now that you mention it, that does seem like a good way to make the card more balanced.
  18. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Ok, I dont know how it word be worded the other way either. *shrugs*

    Cross Breeding (Name)
    2UU
    Enchantment
    All creatures count as each color.

    Thallid, do you think this is rightly costed at 3U? Shifting Sky is 2U, and this is *alot* better. It goes with so many cards, it's amazing.
  19. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Rust Hobgoblin (name?)
    1RR
    Creature - Drifter
    ~this~ can only be blocked if an artifact is in play.
    2/2

    Wither
    3BB
    Sorcery
    Destroy all creature tokens, and all creatures with counters on them.

    Conformity Monster
    G
    Creature - Abomination
    If Conformity Monster deals damage to a creature or player, an opponent may prevent the damage. If he/she does, then you may put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control and draw a card.
    2/2

    Traveler's Isle
    Land
    T: Add 1 to your mana pool
    If a legend is in play, ~this~ gains, "T: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool"

    Faith Builder
    WW
    Creature - Cleric
    Whenever you gain a life, gain an additional life.
    1/2

    Fungal Vitality
    4G
    Instant
    When ~this~ comes into play, sacrifice any number of permanents.
    Put X green 1/1 tokens into play, where X is equal to the number of permanents sacrificed in this way.


    Eggshell Roc
    RR
    Creature - Roc
    Flying
    Whenever a spell is countered, sacrifice ~this~
    2/2
  20. FoundationOfRancor The Gunslinger

    Mana Wall
    2G
    Creature - Energy Manifest Wall (lol)
    Mana Wall has power and toughness each equal to the number of lands you control.
    Mana Wall can block up to X creatures, where X is equal to the number of lands you control.
    4: Destroy target land. Only your oppenent can play this.
    X/X

    (Note: The last ability could be reworded to "Any oppenent may pay 4 to destroy target land" in case there's a paranoid of mechanic redundancy from Phropecy.)

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