CPA Set - Finalize cards

Discussion in 'Home Made Cards' started by Mooseman, Jun 16, 2006.

  1. Limited Yes, but we won't care

    I agree on the new wording for Explosive Goblin, and that Final Charge should be a rare

    Fire Maiden of Norm should be a rare i think.. its abilities are wacky enough :D
    Also, it still refers to its old name (Capricious Fire Maiden).
  2. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    This seems too much like fling and then reload to fling again.
    Maybe it should be 1R, T:, or it should only target creatures.

    T: Put target creature you control on top of owners library. Fire Maiden of Norm deals damage to target creature or player equal to target creatures power.
  3. Limited Yes, but we won't care

    About the Fire Maiden:

    Perhaps she shouldn't have the 'capricious' drawback. We could just up the casting cost and bring the focus to her two other abilities: trading tempo for destruction.

    Fire Maiden of Norm 2RR
    Legendary Creature - Wizard
    Put a creature you control on top of owner's library, T: <this> deals to target creature damage equal to the power of the creature card put on top of owner's library in this way.
    Put a land you control on top of owner's library, T: Destroy target land if its also a creature.
    2/1


    We could also go for casting cost instead of power, so you can't abuse tokens.. or you can reveal the top card.

    hmmm

    "Put a creature you control on top of owner's library: Reveal the top card of your library. <this> deals damage equal to the revealed cards' converted mana cost to target creature. "
  4. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    Wow, that was a total rewrite.
    How about we just make it only target creatures.

    But adding your creature/land to the casting cost is a good idea

    Card Name: Fire Maiden of Norm
    Color: R
    Cost: 1R
    Type: Creature - Fire Maiden
    Pow/Tgh: 2/1
    Rules Text: When Fire Maiden of Norm comes into play, put two cards from your hand on top of your library or sacrifice <This>
    T, Put a target creature you control on top of owners library: Fire Maiden of Norm deals damage to target creature equal to target creatures power.
    T, Put land you control on top of owners library: Destroy target land that is also a creature.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: R
    Artist:
    Number: 105/186
  5. Ransac CPA Trash Man

    That looks good to me.

    Ransac, cpa trash man
  6. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    Card Name: Goblin Rock Thrower
    Color: R
    Cost: 2R
    Type: Creature - Goblin
    Pow/Tgh: 1/1
    Rules Text: T: Goblin Rock Thrower deals 1 damage to target creature or player.
    Whenever a land card is put into any graveyard , you may untap Goblin Rock Thrower.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: R
    Artist:
    Number: 107/186

    Card Name: Goblin Scattershot
    Color: R
    Cost: 1RR
    Type: Creature - Gobin
    Pow/Tgh: 1/1
    Rules Text: R,T: Sacrifice a creature. Goblin Scattershot deals damage equal to the sacrificed creature’s power divided as you choose among two or more target creatures and/or players. Goblin Scattershot deals 1 damage to you.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: U
    Artist:
    Number: 108/186

    Card Name: Grimsonar
    Color: R
    Cost: 4R
    Type: Creature - Berserker
    Pow/Tgh: 3/3
    Rules Text: R: If Grimsonar is an attacking creature, Grimsonar deals 1 damage to all blocking creatures
    t the end of each players turn, that player loses life equal to the power of <this> for each Berserker he controls that didn't attack this turn.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: U
    Artist:
    Number: 109/186


    I got no idea about the rarity of the goblins, but Grimsonar should be U or R.

    Rock thrower change:
    Whenever a land card leaves play , you may untap Goblin Rock Thrower.

    Grimsonar change:
    All Berserkers must attack if able or controller loses life equal to the power of Grimsonar.
  7. Limited Yes, but we won't care

    Goblin Rock Thrower is already a might good card.. I think its a rare and should say not be changed to untap whenever a land leaves play.

    The Goblin Scatterer seems to be uncommon

    If there's already a huge drawback on berserkers not attacking, why force them at all?
    "At the end of each players turn, that player loses life equal to the power of <this> for each Berserker he controls that didn't attack this turn."
  8. Ransac CPA Trash Man

    I agree on the Limited's Grimsonar wording.


    Ransac, cpa trash man
  9. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

  10. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    Card Name: Jötnar Death Troops
    Color: R
    Cost: 5RR
    Type: Creature - Giant
    Pow/Tgh: 4/5
    Rules Text: Haste (This creature may attack and T the turn it comes under your control.)
    Sacrifice Jötnar Death Troops: Destroy all blocking creatures.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: R
    Artist:
    Number: 110/186

    Card Name: Orb of Pain
    Color: R
    Cost: RR
    Type: Enchantment
    Pow/Tgh:
    Rules Text: When Orb of Pain comes into play, it deals two damage to target creature.
    When Orb of Pain leaves play, it deals eight damage to you.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: C
    Artist:
    Number: 111/186

    Card Name: Jatte Beast
    Color: R
    Cost: 4R
    Type: Creature - Troll
    Pow/Tgh: 3/3
    Rules Text: Haste (This creature may attack and T the turn it comes under your control.)
    GB: Regenerate Red Regenerator.
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: C
    Artist:
    Number: 112/186

    Red Regenerator - Jätte or Vittra

    Maybe the Orb can cost 1R?
  11. Limited Yes, but we won't care

    Jatte sounds okay..

    1R for the Orb doesn't seem to cheap.. what were the other orbs costed at?
  12. Ransac CPA Trash Man

    Whatever cost you make this Orb, all of the other orbs must follow.

    For the red regenerator, what about Jätte Beast?


    Ransac, cpa trash man
  13. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    All Orbs were double color costed. I can live with that.

    Jatte Beast....hmmm would translate, roughly, into Troll beast........

    I don't see a problem.

    Rarity of these? The Orbs are all Common.
    Uncommon for the Giant?
    Common for the Jatte?
  14. Limited Yes, but we won't care

    I think the giant should be rare.. its a pretty impressive ability.
  15. Ransac CPA Trash Man

    Yeah, Rare for the giant. The other rarities are fine.


    Ransac, cpa trash man
  16. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    Card Name: Brandr Totem Chief
    Color: R
    Cost: 3R
    Type: Creature - Minion
    Pow/Tgh: 3/1
    Rules Text: B: Brandr Totem Chief becomes a 4/2 Berserker creature with Fear until EOT
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: U
    Artist:
    Number: 113/186

    Card Name: Brandr Totem Minion
    Color: R
    Cost: 2R
    Type: Creature - Minion
    Pow/Tgh: 2/1
    Rules Text: R: Brandr Totem Minion becomes a 4/1 Berserker creature with first strike until EOT
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: C
    Artist:
    Number: 114/186

    Card Name: Brandr Totem Shaman
    Color: R
    Cost: 4R
    Type: Creature - Minion
    Pow/Tgh: 2/3
    Rules Text: 1U,T: All Minions gain flying until EOT
    Flavor Text:
    Rarity: R
    Artist:
    Number: 115/186
  17. Ransac CPA Trash Man

    Common, Uncommon, Rare

    Is the second card's ability supposed to be R?

    Ransac, cpa trash man
  18. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    All the Minions abilities are the same color as it is.
    Maybe it needs changed to a more red attacking ability.
    Ideas?

    I think maybe all the minions are commonm the chiefs are U and the Shamans are rare, or at least should be.
  19. Mooseman Isengar Tussle

    Enchant player card will be in Time spiral, thus:

    King Stirge:
    Flying (This creature can't be blocked except by creatures with flying.)
    Whenever <THIS> deals damage to an opponent, put a +1/+1 counter on it ,<THIS> loses all abilities, becomes an enchant player, enchanting that opponent, and "At the beginning of enchanted player's upkeep, that player loses 1 life." and "When enchanted player leaves game, end the effect that created this ability."

    This goes well with
    Paradox Haze
    Enchanment - Aura
    Enchant Player
    At the begining of enchanted players first upkeep, that player gets an additional upkeep step after this step.
  20. Ransac CPA Trash Man

    Oh! Don't forget to alter the rules text to reflect the selected card name (Not "Red Totem Minion ;))

    Ransac, cpa trash man

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