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Glacier Runoff
Ideally, I'd like to make this card cost 1U, but Blue really isnt a search-land color. Right now im thinking of making it green, sacing an island, and searching for any land. Ideas?
Evernal Archmage
Cut the counter ability.
Edit the tap-artifact activation cost to 2U and no sac thing.
Birthmark Stone
I think Jake's wrong with this one. It can be 2 mana.
Also, it can be reworded simply to say "Whenever a 1/1 creature comes into play, put a +1/+1 counter on it."
Heretic Evangelist
I agree with Jake to cut the once per turn thing.
White/Blue Banner Paladin
Creatures that have protection from their own color are rare, but Im ok with it. White Paladin should have an activation cost of 1U. Blue should be WW. Lets change the creature type, I dont want to throw another completely new creature type in here.
Aquamarine Banner Paladin
Looks pretty good. Lets change the name just to "Banner Paladin"
And probablly change the creature type.
Tax Gatherer
Looks good.
Emmei House Cat
Jakes right; 2/2.
Also, change it to it being simply a cat, instead of the house cat. Also, edit it so you DONT draw the card, you simply reveal it.
(The changes you talked about sound great. Ignore what I said.)
Unusual Favor
Pretty cool, awesome in a no-creature deck.
Crazed Hob-demon
2/2...and a name change, please.
I *Love* the swamp idea! We should make a cycle of them!
Circle of Confinement
This is a very cool card. I would keep it exactly how it is, but change the cc to 1WW.
Redistribute Resources
Ok.
Snake Hypnosis
3G. Maybe even 4G.
The attack thing should cost WW. Blue doesent even do that.
Varketan Dragon
Looks cool.
Varketa's Visor
What Jake said.
Varketan Bard
Why is this creature blue and what is a barb?
Varketan Bard Beta -Rare
3W
Creature -Bard
All able to block Varketan Bard.
Whenever a creature blocks Varketan Bard, you may pay 1U or 4. If you do, put that creature on top of its owners library.
The song draws from far and wide and lulls all its wayward fans to sleep.
1/3
(I see you made some modifications to this card, they look fine, but I still suggest this version)
Varketan Vandal
Why would black get to destroy a creature? We could make this a pure red card and make no other changes, or we could make it black with the red ability, in which case we would have to change the name and creature type. I suggest mono-red.
Concentration Camps
Im going to re-think this card.
Wilt
Ok, 3B.
Nightmare Hounds
I love everything about this card!
Karma Cloak
Excellent card, I love the name. Im not so sure how fair the red one is, but it seems ok.
Chaos Roulette
Uhhh.....ok.
Varketan Sentinel
Either a cc of 4, or a 4/4.
Varketan Soothsaying
This should defintly cost less. Maybe 1U, though Im pretty sure that this can be pretty balanced at U. Its basically on the same scale as brainstorm.
Varketan Vampire
Yup, 3B should be ok though.
Varketan Sanctuary
Im not sure what the point of the first ability is, but im sure you have your reasons. Anti-LD maybe? I dunno. No matter what its supposed to be for, it isnt that strong of an ability. Therefore I think you should cut the activation cost of the second ability to a simple "Sacrifice Varketan Sanctuary:"
If we do that, we have to attach a "You may only activate this whenever you could play a sorcery" on the second ability so its not better than untamed wilds.
...I hope that made sense.
Great cards guys! Thank you so much for helping out for this set!
Ideally, I'd like to make this card cost 1U, but Blue really isnt a search-land color. Right now im thinking of making it green, sacing an island, and searching for any land. Ideas?
Evernal Archmage
Cut the counter ability.
Edit the tap-artifact activation cost to 2U and no sac thing.
Birthmark Stone
I think Jake's wrong with this one. It can be 2 mana.
Also, it can be reworded simply to say "Whenever a 1/1 creature comes into play, put a +1/+1 counter on it."
Heretic Evangelist
I agree with Jake to cut the once per turn thing.
White/Blue Banner Paladin
Creatures that have protection from their own color are rare, but Im ok with it. White Paladin should have an activation cost of 1U. Blue should be WW. Lets change the creature type, I dont want to throw another completely new creature type in here.
Aquamarine Banner Paladin
Looks pretty good. Lets change the name just to "Banner Paladin"
And probablly change the creature type.
Tax Gatherer
Looks good.
Emmei House Cat
Jakes right; 2/2.
Also, change it to it being simply a cat, instead of the house cat. Also, edit it so you DONT draw the card, you simply reveal it.
(The changes you talked about sound great. Ignore what I said.)
Unusual Favor
Pretty cool, awesome in a no-creature deck.
Crazed Hob-demon
2/2...and a name change, please.
I *Love* the swamp idea! We should make a cycle of them!
Circle of Confinement
This is a very cool card. I would keep it exactly how it is, but change the cc to 1WW.
Redistribute Resources
Ok.
Snake Hypnosis
3G. Maybe even 4G.
The attack thing should cost WW. Blue doesent even do that.
Varketan Dragon
Looks cool.
Varketa's Visor
What Jake said.
Varketan Bard
Why is this creature blue and what is a barb?
Varketan Bard Beta -Rare
3W
Creature -Bard
All able to block Varketan Bard.
Whenever a creature blocks Varketan Bard, you may pay 1U or 4. If you do, put that creature on top of its owners library.
The song draws from far and wide and lulls all its wayward fans to sleep.
1/3
(I see you made some modifications to this card, they look fine, but I still suggest this version)
Varketan Vandal
Why would black get to destroy a creature? We could make this a pure red card and make no other changes, or we could make it black with the red ability, in which case we would have to change the name and creature type. I suggest mono-red.
Concentration Camps
Im going to re-think this card.
Wilt
Ok, 3B.
Nightmare Hounds
I love everything about this card!
Karma Cloak
Excellent card, I love the name. Im not so sure how fair the red one is, but it seems ok.
Chaos Roulette
Uhhh.....ok.
Varketan Sentinel
Either a cc of 4, or a 4/4.
Varketan Soothsaying
This should defintly cost less. Maybe 1U, though Im pretty sure that this can be pretty balanced at U. Its basically on the same scale as brainstorm.
Varketan Vampire
Yup, 3B should be ok though.
Varketan Sanctuary
Im not sure what the point of the first ability is, but im sure you have your reasons. Anti-LD maybe? I dunno. No matter what its supposed to be for, it isnt that strong of an ability. Therefore I think you should cut the activation cost of the second ability to a simple "Sacrifice Varketan Sanctuary:"
If we do that, we have to attach a "You may only activate this whenever you could play a sorcery" on the second ability so its not better than untamed wilds.
...I hope that made sense.
Great cards guys! Thank you so much for helping out for this set!