Sorry guys, I wasn't trying to be critical and I didn't mean to offend if I did. Its much easier to
not hold your tongue when you don't think your subject is listening.
Out of fairness to
Nightstalkers (I didn't realize that YOU made that card, right on dude) and
orgg I'll extrapolate on my feelings on E and H.
PS - Congrats on getting chosen guys.
E
That 3rd line of text that WotC added was necessary but it simultaneously near ruined the mechanic. Without it, the card would be a mess to play...who gets priority, revenge casts, wasting resources, lots of arguing.
Limiting the mechanic to your turn neutralizes (for the most part) all of those nasty little side effects, but it has now turn it into a counter-hate card for ANY deck (keep in mind its' an artifact). The ability is a blue hoser about 90% of the time, it should not be colorless. It also doesn't make much sense because the original mechanic is
such a blue mechanic.
So to make the card work, you've got to give it one ugly casting cost...
H
Orgg, after reading your response I see its purpose better and it does seem like a cooler effect - and I'm glad its initial birth wasn't due to some sick combo. However there are 2 specific things about this mechanic that would prevent me from choosing it:
1 - IMO There aren't enough detrimental upkeep effects that an opponent would play in a single game of Magic (even in MP) that warrant dedicating some spots of your deck to this card. Maybe making Blastoderm die 1 turn sooner, or maybe making Grining Demon eat 4 life just isn't worth it to me.
2 - I personally am not inspired to build a deck around this card as a weapon. There are definitely cards that can benefit from it: Umbilicus, Reya, Phy. Arena, Form of the Dragon...but it just doesn't yank out my vote. If it also gave you an extra untap step then that would be very cool - and would most likely be fairly balanced since you wouldn't be able to cast sorcery speed stuff twice.
From Orgg
I have the feeling your not-tournament-calibre-but-fun card will make it through.
I'm assuming that this was directed at my "I don't want the "Make your own card" to end up in the junk rare box", and if it was I stand by it. I want the card to be good enough to be usable in many different styles of decks - like Forgotten Ancient is. Mechanics like these are not versatile, hence they'd stand a very good chance of ending up right in that junk rare box.
If this card(s) were printed would I consider building a deck with it? Definitely. That doesn't mean I want it to be the ultimate Johnny card. 'Make your own card' should be coveted by ALL styles of player, so it could become a truly classic card.