Your fix of my ideas looks good. The changes you made to your cards after
my review look good too.
Force Of Will Smith brought up some very good points that I totally over-
looked.
Son of the Psion (1U)
Legendary Creature - Human Maven
Son of the Psion comes into play with 2 Psi counter on it.
Remove a Psi counter from Son of the Psion, Tap: Son of the Psion deals 1 damage to target creature or player.
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Maybe I'm not seeing the whole picture but this seems kind of weak for
a Legend. I'd like to suggest something like this:
Son of the Psion (XU) (might need to be XXU)
Legendary Creature - Human Maven
Son of the Psion comes into play with X Psi counter on it.
Remove a Psi counter from Son of the Psion, Tap: Put a Psion counter on
each other creature you control.
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