1,2,3,4, I declare a ... poetry contest

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Bob

Guest
Rain always seem to mean sadness.

I am the worst poet ever. I wish I wasn't. If I was a good poet, my band could have good lyrics.
 
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Thallid Ice Cream Man

Guest
Greg Lake hopped into the trap.
schwing his leg
ow
 
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Thallid Ice Cream Man

Guest
I saw the turtle. It was on the
gggggggggggggrrrrrrrrrrround.
fortunately, the turtle,,,,,,,,,,,.
spun aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrround.

there. happy?
 
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Svenmonkey

Guest
Ham

It tastes pretty bad,
it wants to consume me,
I do not want to consume it,
come on, ham, what are you doing?
Do you think I'm a goiter or something?
 
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Apollo

Guest
This is for a girl I met online, Erin. One day, I don't remember why, but she claimed to be hiding in my closet. I told her that I looked in the closet and she wasn't there, and she told me that she had run away really quick. In response, I wrote this goofy poem:

Erin and eric would talk every night
Staying up till the morning light
She said he was fine--
He liked her behind--
Especially when she wore clothes that were tight ;-)

Then one night, erin decided to hide
In the room in which eric resides
But she decided to go
Without saying hello
And eric was left unsatisfied
 
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Svenmonkey

Guest
Apollo is probably one of those people who goes in chat rooms for a reason that isn't making fun of folks you don't know.

Reenactment of Apollo's conversation with that person:
Apollo:I have a closet.
Loveurloins6969 (Erin): Hey everyone. Check out my webcam <http://38.234.29.321>
Apollo: You're hiding in my closet?!
Loveurloins6969 (Erin): Hey everyone. Check out my webcam <http://38.234.29.321>
Apollo: No you aren't! I looked.
Loveurloins6969 (Erin): Hey everyone. Check out my webcam <http://38.234.29.321>
Apollo: I'm going to write you a poem.

:p ;)
 
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Mazzak

Guest
Good ol' personal mythology... makes for good content...
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The Song Of Dust - Mazzak Dy'Qtzyano

It is the walls
It is the floor
The ceiling too
It has no door…

In this black box
The sun may shine
Feeding with its
Light the vine
The souls of trillions
In tendrils wrapped
Secure but mortal-
They are trapped!

And in the dark
The terrors dwell
My conscious product:
A worldly Hell
A dual being
From my mind
To create, and
Destroy in kind!

Behold! From dust
And scrap and shard
Arise the shadow
Of the scarred
But love and beauty
In his eyes
The strength
Of prison-bars disguise!

Behold! From rust
And wind and rain
He comes to split
The walls in twain
The whispers
Of the storm shall say,
Mazzak you fool,
‘Tis not your clay!

Light and dark
What is and not
Firmament, void
I shape their lot
One will fall
One will remain
And only then
Shall cease the pain

Through new creation
Or world’s end
I will triumph
I will ascend
He fears the calming
He fears the flames
They fear themselves,
They fear their names!

From void
The firmament shall spring
Worlds made anew
A common thing
For all that is
Is made of Love
Boundless as
The violet skies above!

So here I sing
The song of dust
The song of splinters
And of rust
I sing the song
In voices two
Dear Zhyanno,
I sing for you!
 
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Thallid Ice Cream Man

Guest
tramp supersucks.
yes no
check message length
regard the taille of the options springer flow
eine million
knight swords extend towards infinity with the sound effect
scroll
bar
and combine them
and you get hungry
in the risk game

parse
c
vroom
whenn is the end
we eagerlly waait
the succulent stabbing smile of the face of death in our backs
connect search F4
nah.
 
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DÛke

Guest
...I know this is not a serious thread, but I will share a more serious poem here.

Although incomplete, the poem makes a clear message. This is unedited work, so if some parts sound unmusical, it is quite expected. The first part of the poem was composed by two friends of mine - I joined them later and added my own insights and revisions to it. Beyond the first part, all other parts of the poem are of my own creation - my friends did not like where I was taking the poem, but again, I did not exactly find much taste and sophistication where they were leading it either.

Few parts of this poem are inspired by the Bible.

The Evil onto Light

Part I: The Child

I rise as I sink beneath the depths of mystery.
Mirrors made me look at the ways of life –
Before me, stood the Mosaic of the truths.
Before me, a question mark and a doubt.

Of agonizing moments we experience –
Love and impatience, together in one sphere of sight.
It’s forbidden to talk, impossible to move.
Silence is a virtue! What is a God’s word!
Punish me now! – I want to feel the exact pain.
Then reintroduce the joy, till I differentiate both.
Open my heart for I desire to know.

Is it madness that one beholds?
Is it, when the walls of obscurity are taken down?
Answer me, you looking sure Man!
If I lose my faith, I lose my mind.
If I lose my mind, I lose the world.

Part II: Masquerade

It is not against myself that I move,
Bleeding myself the pain of leaving me behind.
But it is that I move with myself that I am pained.
To my desires I run, to my own embrace –
And thus I run away from and against the world.

Towards pleasure and happiness the world moves,
Weary and away from the slightest pains.
Liberation from pain – a movement of deliberation.
They have lost all tracks of time,
Thus they are fond of quickness,
Of Holy words and instant Nobility.
They are wisest wise men,
They stand on the highest peaks,
The highest mountains,
But neither have they climbed to this highness
Nor do they know the art of climbing –
They have stolen high words
And assumed a Good appearance.
And now they walk amongst us
Reciting what they have stolen.

Against their desires they run.
Free of thought, for they know of you,
That for you are taught,
And to run to you they want,
Running away from their shadows.
But he who runs from his shadow never escapes.
It is their secret wishes and self-victimizations,
Their vengeances and hatred,
That they begin to seek you,
Out of bad feelings and bad spirits,
That they begin to seek you,
But you are beyond what they seek:
They seek an end to their tears and longing,
And a punishment to all those they hate –
In your name they practice their base instincts,
In the name of Holiness.
It is in this manner that they seek.

Towards you they leap,
Out of desperate wanting
Running against their desires for their desires,
Against their thoughts for their thoughts –
Running towards a mirror.
A mirror shatters when one runs into it with such desperation,
And this is the shattering of reflections.

Part III: Faith

Blessed is he who reads aloud the words of the prophecy.
And blessed are those who hear.
But silence is a virtue! What is a God’s word!
They see the Deus absconditus
They announce the Deus evidens,
And a home they have given him.
And thus they have denounced their faith.
Victorious Man! Defeated God!

Part IV: Overcoming

This is the victory that has overcome the world.
Deliver Me O god, O godly! Deliver Me out of My Good.
Forgive Me My Holiness. Forgive Me My Forgiveness.
Punish My repentance. I have moved against you. I am guilty.
Deliver Me O god, O godly! Punish Me!
For I love My pain, thus I seek My nobility.
Punish Me now! – I want to feel the exact pain.
Then reintroduce the joy, till I differentiate both.
Open My heart for I desire to know.
It is not against Myself that I move,
Bleeding myself the pain of leaving me behind.
But it is that I move with Myself that I am pained.
To My desires I run, to My own embrace –
And thus I run away from and against the world.

If I lose My faith, I lose My mind.
If I lose My mind, I lose the world.
And thus I have found My faith!
And thus I have found My mind!

Part V: The Antichrist

There is one Evil I must repent:
My repenting of what the World pronounces “Evil.”
For what the world pronounces it always mispronounces.
Deliver me O god, O godly! Punish me!
Deliver me from the Peace of the world!
Pronounce the Good – Evil.
Pronounce the Evil – Good.
Pronounce the World – Antichrist.
Pronounce the Child – the Evil onto Light.
Amen!
 
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Apollo

Guest
Haha Sven, that wasn't quite it--actually, she wouldn't leave me alone at first. But Loveurloins6969 sounds like a pretty cool chick, maybe I'll put her on my buddy list. :p
 
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Zhaneel

Guest
I had a nightmare about this thread...

Needless to say, I don't like poetry.
 
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Thallid Ice Cream Man

Guest
I don't either.

Can we move this to classic questions?
 
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train

Guest
The Beast

It intrigues you...
It entices you...
You dabble into it...
It becomes part of you...
It takes everything you have and makes it its own...
It leaves you as but a shell of the being you once were...

@%^#$^& WOTC!!!!...
 
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Thallid Ice Cream Man

Guest
Just keep moving, nothing to see here...























I wuv u soo much
I wuved you 4ever
and up in your crotch
is a little beaver






















.........

Doesn't quite rhyme, does it?
 
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Thallid Ice Cream Man

Guest
Here's a thread I posted on that thread by Evan_Mann. I'm sure he'll be kind enough to mind that I'm going to put it here.

With a word, the hour departs.
The wings swirl, enforcing a moment's caution.
the moment, black like the towering misty dewrusted bell, calms our being, chills the collective brain soil.

Earwigs
reproduced in exactitude, size and dimensions correct
clatter and advance - halt - jerk together again
as letters on a bloody page

O, I write and the words write me, emu
especially the essere typos
toys of my brain and the tools of god/
/thank you qwerty, pew of the power of psionic force.
 
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