Looks right to me,
Untap, upkeep, draw, Mountain, attack with the Patrol and the Shaman, responses?
Darthferret: 10
Library: 28
Hand: 3
Play:
(U,U) Forest x 2
(U,U,U) Mountain x 3
Enchant: Instill Energy (target gets haste and can untap an additional time on my turn)
(T) Goblin Patrol (2/1 Echo)
(U) Ley Druid (1/1, T: untap a land) **Instilled**
(T) Storm Shaman (0/4 R: ~ gets +1/+0 until EOT)
Graveyard: Rampant Growth, Fog, Fog Patch, Spore Frog, Lotus Petal, Nature's Chosen
RFG:
mooseman: 4
Library: 28
Hand: 4
Play:
(T) Island
(TTTT) Swamp
Soul Kiss (Enchant creature B, Pay 1 life: Enchanted creature gets +2/+2 until end of turn. Play this ability no more than three times each turn.)
(T) Dauthi Jackal (3/3, Shadow BB, Sacrifice authi Jackal: Destroy target blocking creature.) (+1/+2 counter on him from thrull) KISSED
(S) Hypnotic Specter (2/2, Flying Whenever Hypnotic Specter deals damage to an opponent, that player discards a card at random.)
(S) Metathran Zombie (1/1, B : Regenerate)
Graveyard: Dark Ritual, Armor Thrull, Cadaverous Knight, Seal of Removal
RFG: