No problem, FoR. This looks like a fun deck to me, and it just caught my attention.
Life/Death instead of Restless Dreams is not a bad idea. You don't discard anything with it, and if you cut Kamahl entirely then you have a relatively painless and cheap recursion spell.
About the less amount of Swamps:
I forgot the condition of Barbarian Outcast. Your switch to more Swamps is a good idea. Sorry about that. You could try replacing Mountains with Tainted Peak or Sulfurous Springs.
I'm not sure if you should cut the Pardic Collaborators or not. There are technically less Swamps, but if you have two Swamps out, he's a nice threat to your opponent and you don't have to worry about over extending your hand to mass removal. However, if you're playing in Type II, there isn't as much mass removal as efficient targetted removal in most decks: AEther Burst, Chainer's Edict, Innocent Blood, Recoil, Repulse, etc. Depending on what you face most often, I would suggest you cut him. Think of him as having an optional upkeep of BB or B and you'll see how effective this card really is to you. If you cut him, consider the following as potential replacements:
Halberdier, 3R, Creature — Barbarian 3/1, Odyssey Common
First strike
His reputation precedes him-and so does his weapon.
Possessed Barbarian, 2RR, Creature -- Barbarian 3/3, Torment
Rare
First strike
Threshold - Possessed Barbarian gets +1/+1, is black, and has "2B, T: Destroy target red creature."
They're not great, but they're at least the same cc and a higher power. I mention the common because it will be easier for you to get your hands on.
I also still suggest cutting out at least one Balthor the Stout. He's strong in a Barbarian deck, yes, however, he's a 3cc creature in a deck full of 3cc spells. Also, since he's a Legend, you can't have more than one in play anyway. You really want to space out the potential of drawing him a little bit. Unfortunately, he's not as strong as Crusade or even Glorious Anthem.
Also, given the high mana curve of the deck, I'd suggest either some additional mass removal (Earthquake or Volcanic Spray), or some sort of way to speed up your mana.
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