OK,
I'm not the best deck builder, but I do think I have so good advice for this deck type. I'm sure there are others that might have better ideas.
I think you have to much Discard, if I count correctly there are 20+ sources. I would go with about 10.
4 Order of Yawgmoth
4 Alley Grifters
4 Parallax Nexus
4 Unnerve
2 Stupor
3 Duress
I would add 1 Duress, And 1 Stupor. Maybe add Three Ravenous rats, and drop the rest.
Add 2 or 3 Phyrexian Negators for beatdown.
Creature distruction,
I would use 2 or 3 Thrashing Wumpus. Masticore is good, but I would only have 2, main deck.
3 Ticking Gnomes
3 Powder kegs
4 Snuff out
2 Vendetta
Utilitys,
Yawgmoth will is a must, 3 should do it.
4 Dark Ritual
2 Vampiric Tutors
Land,
4 Rishidan Ports
3 Spawning Pool
2 Dustbowl
Just some suggestions from a scrub, I guess the 2 main things that jumped out at me was, to much discard, and to many Masticores.
Here is a typical Black Control
3 Spawning Pool
4 Rishidan Port
2 Dust bowl
14 Swamp
2 Negator
3 Ravenous Rats
3 Trashing Wumpus
2 Masticore
3 Ticking Gnomes
4 Duress
3 Stupor
4 Snuff out
2 Vendetta
2 Vampiric Tutor
3 Yawgmoth Will
4 Dark Ritual
3 Powder Keg
Sideboard,
3 Massacre
2 Negator
3 Distorting Lens
3 Perish
1 Eradicate
3 Rapid Decay
Hope this is Useful Info.
[me][/me]
[Edited by Griffith_se on May 15th, 2000 at 01:09 PM]