One for the Doctor's

[Griffith_se]

To: The deck Doc's,

What would you do to make this better? Don't say scap it

Less Suicide/Suicide Black

10 Swamps
8 Plains
4 City of brass

3 Mother of runes
4 Flesh reaver
3 Phyrexian negator

4 Spirit link
3 Disenchant
1 Worship
4 Duress
3 Stupor
2 Persecute
3 Vampiric tutor
4 Dark ritual
4 Vendetta

Thanks
Griffith_se

 

[Gizmo]

Well I`ve seen this deck before in another guise but fundamentally similar.

I think you need more creatures - and with evasion would be good as then you needn`t use the Mother.
Also, the following occurs:
1. Why do you NEED Dark Ritual. The deck has a very low mana curve already so they seem to just waste slots.
2. For a deck that needs to see removal to force it`s vulnerable creatures through there seems to be a noticeable lack of the stuff - and is Vendetta the best option considering you will often be taking hits from the Flesh Reaver as well?

4 Flesh Reaver
4 Skittering Skirge
3 Phyrexian Negator
3 Cateran Enforcer

4 Spirit Link
3 Disenchant
3 Pacifism
2 Parallax Wave
1 Noble Purpose

2 Vampiric Tutor
4 Duress
4 Vicious Hunger
1 Persecute

4 City Of Brass
4 Remote Farm
2 Plains
12 Swamp

This version in more intent on creature defense - PWave should be excellent at holding them off the few turns you need. SB would need to takcle nono-creature decks. not sure the Farm is a good thing, but they do ensure getting the WW as the deck requires it.