Looking for critiques on an RPG I've designed

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Gryphonclaw

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I am looking for people to read through and critique as much as they wish of a game that I have designed.
So far I just have the system laid out and a general idea of the setting.
I would like feedback on the clarity, simplicity/lack of simplicity, or anything else you would like to comment on.
Post here and I will e-mail you with an attached doc file to read.
 
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