can u help my b/r deck?

[Prosk8ter3388]

type 2 only

lands:
12 mountains
12 swamps

red:
4 stone rain
4 thunderscape familiar
2 mire kavu
1 tahngarth, talruum hero
3 shock

black:
4 rain of tears
3 despoil
3 nightscape battlemage
1 phyrexain scuta
4 dark ritual
3 nightscape familiar

gold:
4 terinate
1 pyre zombie
4 lava zombie

 

[Killer Joe]

4x Stone Rain
4x Despoils
4x Plague Spores
4x Terminate
4x Agonizing Demise
20 cards yielding 12x Land Destruction spells and 12x Removal spells.
Add some cheap burn spells:
4x Seal of Fire
4x Shock
Add some creatures:
2x Goham Djinn (The black one w/Regeneration)
2x Harlum Djinn (The red one w/Haste)
4x the 2/2 R/B Zombie w/Pro White
I'm thinking you're on a budget, if not, then get 4x Skizziks, 4x Voids, 4x Pyre Zombies, 4x Urza's Rage, 4x etc....

 

[terzarima]

I would add some battle mages.. although you would only be able to pay one of the kicker costs, it would still be worth it, and they're only uncommon (YJ, remember, some of us can't work yet, something about labour laws...)

 

[Killer Joe]

That's why I suggested commons first.
Check out my little gem of an all commons B/R deck, it's good. You'll find it in my thread of Four Commons for Your Viewing pleasure.