Limrik (did I spell that right)

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Gryphonclaw

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Okay, here's a limrik totally inspired by the gods. I say this cause it was about 5 minutes from inspiration to final format:

Dogs come in many a schematic,
Some large, some small and dynamic,
But all can agree,
To their one constancy,
A breath that is quite aromatic.

And I'm not that good of a poet. Although I do like some types of poetry, hence my sig.
 
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Duel

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Ahh, poetry! I'm back in my forte! Made a couple of changes for the sake of rhyme scheme, but that's about it.

Dogs come in many a schematic,
Some large, but some small and dynamic,
But we all can agree,
That their one constancy,
Is a breath that is quite aromatic.

I assumed "quite" meant "not"
 
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Gryphonclaw

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ummmm, i know that my rhythm needs work, but this was quite spontaneus.

Quite means very. Aromatic means that it has a significant odor, not necessarily good.
This poem was inspired when I was putting on my shoes and I was approached by our resident canine. He has a habit of walking right up to one and placing his nose within inches of mine, all the while staring at me sort of myopically.
 
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