would a few of ya'll critique this for me?

[theorgg]

can I get a critique here?

thanks.

 

[Chaos Turtle]

Cute outfit.
Who's the human?

 

[TomB]

Ummm, what is it for?

 

[Spiderman]

Here goes:

It looks too choppy; the head definately looks like it was pasted it. The cape is flat too; needs shading or something.

 

[theorgg]

go to the T versus everything page and look at T vs David Nimmo.

that'll explain everything. he also pops up in other comics. it's a running gag.

http://www.sit.wisc.edu/~kljense3/MrTvs.html

 

[TomB]

Oh. OK.

What's the getup all about?

 

[theorgg]

He's going to be one of Mr. T's opponants.
I'm making fun of people like "makup boy" from the Urza's Desteny PR. remember the "voodoo prince" with the voodoo doll, turtle?

I've seen several of theese people who try to get an edge with a costume or makup.
This parodys that.
He's also gonna get thrown.

 

[TomB]

Oh. Yeah, it'll work. Most of those things look somewhat pasted together anyways.

Hey, weren't you thinking about putting together a Mr.T vs. Magic: The Gathering? Have you seen the one on Mr.T vs. Pokemon? It's not bad.

TomB
CPA Member

 

[Chaos Turtle]

Heh-heh... voodoo guy. Yeah. And I think I realized who you are too, Orgg, now that I've had a little time to think about it.
Didn't you win a box in a drawing at Destiny prerelease? If I've got the right guy, you jumped off the dais and the whole room shook! What are you, like 7 feet tall?

I tremble before your awesome might!

Which means we've never played... I'd remember that for sure.

 

[theorgg]

TomB: Yep. that's the comic I was working on. and I have seen the T vs Pokemon ones. I'm trying my best for the Mr. T versus Magic comic. so far, T is throwing five people. including long

Turtle:Yea. that was me.
half a box.
first time I'd won anything in a tournament and I was excited. I'm 6'6.