A little help over here, please.

[TheShieldBearer]

Okay i have had this white deck for a few months now and it seems to be kickin butt in my piss ant little town and i know it is bound to have big holes in it that i probably dont see so would you guys take a whack at it and see what might help me out


TheShieldBearer's (very sick)White Deck:-:


LAND:
4 Karoo
24 Plains
The Rest:
4 Disenchant
3 Pacifism
2 Shield Bearer
2 Erase
2 Kismet
2 Ruins of Trokair
2 Ivory Cup
1 Serene Offering
1 Remedy
1 Pearl Dragon
1 Angelic Blessing
1 Mounted Archers
1 Intrepid Hero
2 Hero's Resolve
1 Sun Clasp
2 Wall of Resistance
1 Benevolent Unicorn
1 Fortified Area
1 Favorable Destiny
2 Holy Strength
1 Jabari's Influence
1 Personal Incarnation
1 Wall of Glare
1 Inviolability
1 Kithkin Armor
2 Jamuraan Lion
1 Seeker
2 Ritual of Steel
2 Soltari Visionary
1 Repentance
4 Radiant's Judgement
1 Radiant's Dragoons
1 Mother of Runes
2 Divine Offering
1 Serra Bestiary
1 Alabaster Potion
1 Invulnerability

SideBoard:
2 Circle of Protection: Red
1 Circle of Protection: Black
1 Circle of Protection: Artifact
1 Circle of Protection: White
1 Circle of Protection: Blue
1 Circle of Protection: Green

any help appreciated

 

[Duel]

Um, the deck looks like a random collection of cards. Focus it more. If you want life gain, go for: Contemplation, Orim's prayer, soldevi digger, contemplate, radiant's dragoons, soul warden, Story Circle.

If you want speed, go for soltari anything, go for savannah lions, go for reconnasaince, go for fresh volunteers, go for rebels (though you don't need a rebel-summoning deck, at all!), go for horn of greed.

choose one or the other. I had a deck like that, and while it's decent, it's not pared down enough to be effecient, nor it is massive enough to be all-encompassing. Choose a style and go for it.

 

[herald of valdemar]

You want to have at least 4 of each card if you can help it. This allows you to draw it more often.

 

[galtwish]

What white or artifact cards do you have access to (own or are locally available)? That would really help in giving you suggestions.

Erik

 

[rkoelsch]

Cards you might consider
Benevolent Unicorn needs to be 4 or 0 it just works so much better in multiple
Enlightened Tutor for all the enchantments you have.
Benalish Hero or Mesa Pegasus Banding kicks *** in sixth edition rules
I think you need more creatures and less spells. The deck looks more control than beatdown. Preacher is a very good control card. If you have preacher include some sacrifice effects like High Market or Fanatical Devotion.
Crackdown works well with Kismet. Have fun.

 

[Densmore]

any sort of WW can use order of leitburs,orders of the white sheild,white knights.
also like the guy said soltari stuff helps,if nothing else but preists and monks.
some tithes and land taxes help with deck thinning.
balances can help out if you get caught by a masacre or somthing like it.